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Tearing into this soul,
fingers of life
Piercing into this heart,
a rusted knife

Rivers of tears,
that shall never be shed
I've been living this trying life,
as one of the dead

My mind encased,
within a metal box
Decorated with every emotion,
there is but one key to all these locks

Held in my hand,
an uncovered lie
A piece of myself,
I'd been trying to hide

Walking through a forest,
of bryers and thorns
From a fragile state of mind,
this realization was torn

Reaching into this soul now,
are the hands of my father
And seeping into this heart-surly,
is the love I thought was a bother

Now I sigh deeply,
finally sure of myself
For this beat of life,
is one of the best I've ever felt.
©2007-2009 ~INUawesome121
:iconinuawesome121:

Author's Comments

Right, so my mom is a single parent, and without my dad I had never thought I was missing anything. But then, one of my friends dad likes to call be his daughter, but I cant call him dad because I already have a great one that I am keeping in touch with a lot better now^^

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:iconspiritualwolfyokai:
I glad you and your dad are getting along. :aww: Awesome poem!

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You took so long to wake up to cold-hard reality, that we had hot chocolate.
:iconinuawesome121:
hehe (so am I), thanks so much :hug:

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"looking in a mirror
what do I see?
an unknown face
looking back at me
a face twisted with anger and pain
to represent the night my tears fell like rain"
I found this poem on a sheet of lined paper at a train
station when I was 9
:iconspiritualwolfyokai:
your welcome :glomp:

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You took so long to wake up to cold-hard reality, that we had hot chocolate.
:iconinuawesome121:
Mwahahaha, I :glomp: you back!

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"looking in a mirror
what do I see?
an unknown face
looking back at me
a face twisted with anger and pain
to represent the night my tears fell like rain"
I found this poem on a sheet of lined paper at a train
station when I was 9
:iconspiritualwolfyokai:
...and I re-return it! :glomp: :laughing:

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You took so long to wake up to cold-hard reality, that we had hot chocolate.
:iconunfallensoldier777:
great expression.:)

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Born to fight, trained to kill,
prepared to die, but never will.

Smile you still got 10 secounds left to live.:)
:iconinuawesome121:
Thanks! :)

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"I asked Jesus how much he loved me, and he streached out his arms and died." (Yeah, I know it is kinda blunt, but it was a poster in my sunday youth class >< I LOVE it)
:iconunfallensoldier777:
np

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Born to fight, trained to kill,
prepared to die, but never will.

Smile you still got 10 secounds left to live.:)
:iconluverpigs:
i really like ur poem, i wish my father and i got along, but hey thats his problem not mine, n-e-ways, u have a great talent, unlike me, who cant write, but thats my oppinion, n-e-ways way off topic, really liked the poem:D

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"I have fought a good fight, i have finished my course, i have kept the faith"
2TIM 4:7

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